Oh, I see....a lot of fifth graders who are awesome poets!!!! Continue reading and see how your classmates felt after reading Francis Scott Key's "Star Spangled Banner."
The battle rages while we view,
Our flag must stay
We have asked of them to shoo
Some stay put while some make way
Dusk turns to dawn and war is on
Bodies lay motionless on people's lawn
Muskets on every porch
Houses set fire by a torch
Rampage comes along with storms
People are frightened and flee
Why is it so hard to see
We are always causing swarms ~ Mac
Bombs bursting in air with a red glare.
Men in fear, but the flag windy in air. ~ Kirk
Do You Wish?
Do you wish you were there on that happy morning?
Do you wish you were there to fight for your freedom?
Are you glad that America is now free? ~ Allie
The flag I love
Stood through the night
You could see it by
Dawn's early light
It gave proof through the night
That our beautiful cloud was still there
With the bomb holes and bullet holes
Our flag was still there
Standing for our freedom ~ Megan
The ware of the early United States
The war at sea was never fair
British took the men for their own
And our first ship was destroyed
The war on land burned Washington
The first lady saved documents
At the end, the flag still stood
And this is why we have a National Anthem ~ Genevieve
Why doth the war have to go on?
Why doth we have to break the bond?
Why doth all the mothers have to weep?
Why can't all of us go to sleep? ~ Scotty
My flag stays strong for me
So everyone can see
How bright my life is
And how free I can be
I will stay strong
Like my flag and live in peace
For this is my nation and country
No matter how free people see me
I will stay strong like my flag! ~ Lilyana
It was a dark and horrid night
Bombs were flying everywhere
Ships were sinking
They knew the U.S. were doing the best they could
but our flag was still there ~ Luke
It was a dark and stormy night
While everyone was in a fight
And it was just a scene of fright
Men are risking their lives
Let's hope they aren't just be giant lies
Oh I hope this will end
Or else my daddy will die ~ Maia
Have you ever wanted to be there
and Fight for your country?
When they burned the capitol
and out came a battle?
She saved important papers
And George's famous portrait
But do you wish you were there? ~ Tara
I wrote this poem to tell the nation
We are free to create our own stations
This place needs a leader
Not a dirty rotten cheater
This song
Helps us get along
Together we can make it a better place
It is not a mile long race ~ Madison
The flag is still standing
We will fight and be strong
We will keep expanding
You can see the light in their eyes
We will not tell lies
Many did die
So we are grateful
For the time
They did really fine ~ Kenzie
1814, what a horrible day but a great poem and Dolly Madison an inspiration of saying, "Will you believe it? Here I am within sound of a cannon!" Oh, Francis Scott just had to express his feelings with just a small poem but with lots of menaing. Each word meant a million other things and now a great symbol of now a great state. ~ Cambria
The scouts on the ground too weak to fight
And the flag still standing in the early night
The houses still burning
And the scout mind turning
A disaster happened and people think this is why
Someone fired a shot and made people die
The stars on the flag are still there
Seem bright in the night like a flare
The war was bad and it makes people sad
To know their families are gone
They're happy the war is over
That's what the flag represents
And that is why people died in tents ~ Ember
When the American flag was raised up high
Francis Scott Key stood near by
There was joyful shouting
and singing of glee
They sang a song written
by Francis Scott Key ~ Sarah
wait a sec i did not post that. weired
ReplyDeleteAllie you wrote it for the flag thing out of the our nation book remember!
ReplyDeleteMaia
Wow! I love reading all of these! We have the best class ever! You all are very talented writers. Especially when we did that perspective writing where you were either a woodchip or a ball! You guys and gals rock my world!
ReplyDelete~Mac